We showed the current footage to Mr Henton to see what recommendation and changes he would suggest to us. Mr Henton said that it was good, but the assassination of JFK footage wasn't ours so we should start our opening with a detailed description of the clip. He then went on to say because it was found footage and not out own, we could lose marks because of it.
As a group we took this into consideration, but we have decided to keep the clip and not change it to details.We did this be we think it could completely ruin the effect of the clip.
Another problem that we encountered was the time, Mr Henton said that our clip was too long and we needed to cut it down. To do this Jordan will also removing some clips and shortening others.
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